More and more people are moving from rural areas to cities in search of better life, but city has its own problems. Why do you think they move to cities? Suggest solutions
Nowadays many people
concern
about Wrong verb form
are concerned
high
education and its necessity in the contemporary world. Some claim that the most essential qualities for a Correct word choice
higher
business
success are soft Change noun form
business's
skills
, including social and communicative adaptation of employees, which are more important than academic knowledge. From my perspective, I partly agree with that statement since soft skills
obviously do matter, but we can not depreciate people's education in some cases.
First of all, being a communicative and charismatic person is important for career growth. There are some situations when someone's school results cannot properly reflect their practical skills
or erudition. Moreover
, if a person strives to reach certain goals, it is important to maintain good character and the right motivation so that people will follow them. For example
, we all remember Steve Jobs, who did not even graduate from university, but he made an enormous contribution to technological progress. However
, this
is more of an exception than a rule.
However
, soft skills
can be appropriate for some creative or social jobs. In my view, when we talk about technical professions such
as engineers, statisticians, analysts, etc., it is essential for them to be highly qualified academically and be
Unnecessary verb
apply
graduated
from related universities. Replace the word
graduate
For example
, it is hardly
to imagine a situation when the pilot of our plane got Change the word
hard
this
job only because they are a friendly extravert, but not because they passed obligatory exams.
In conclusion, being socially adaptable and self-confident are important skills
for getting the job of your dreams. However
, I strongly believe that it is vital to not forget about professions where academic qualifications are mandatory. In my view, employees should pursue both soft and hard skills
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite