The pie charts below provide some informaion about employment patterns in Great Britain in 1992.
The diagrams below compare employment patterns between
men
and women
with different data in two options ( manual and non-manual) in Great Britain in 1992.
It is clear that
there is a significant difference between females
and males
. In both gender general labourers and other non-manuals had the lowest proportion and also
craft or similar in manual option was approximately equal between men
and women
.
The percentage of craft or similar among females
was 27 per cent
while
this
figure for males
was about 26 per cent
. ,Also
general labourers among men
and women
were almost equal was 2 and 1 per cent
respectively. In the other manual males
had the most proportion in comparison to females
24 per cent
while
just 3 per cent
for females
.
The percentage of managerial and professional non-manual among men
was 36 per cent
while
this
rate for the opposite gender was 27 per cent
. ,Also
the figures for clerical or related was very different among both gender 31 per cent
for women
and just 6 per cent
for male. While
other non-manual information between females
and males
almost had equal numbers 9 and 6 per cent
respectively.Submitted by www.marzieh.eidi on
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