In spite of advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?In spite of advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

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is controlling the big countries' exports and imports, that can be clear for us in poor places ,

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serious issue , The government of each country must be more strict with a new system of their prodcations,Another point , is people should help the government to save their rights by working in agriculture.

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