The chart below give the number of people employed in five types of work in a certain region in Australia in 2001 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph shows
the
information about how many people worked in five different work types in a specific location in Australia in the years 2001 and 2008. Correct article usage
apply
Overall
, in both years, the highest number of people worked in the Sales department
while
the lowest number was seen in the Farming department
.
To begin
with, the number of people employed in Sales in the year 2001 was 180000. This
figure increased by a small value to approximately 190000 in 2008. The same pattern of increment was shown by the Computing department
as well as
the Nursing department
. In the Computer field, 100,000 humans worked in the initial year considered and raised to 110000 by 2008. Moving Further
, around 50,000 workers were in the medical division in 2008 .
It is evident that the employees in the Accounting and Agriculture department
got reduced in the given time period by a value of 10,000 to reach 80,000 and 20,000 respectively.Submitted by kavitha7797 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Vocabulary: Replace the words department with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
▼
Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+
Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!