The chart below shows the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010.
The chart gives information on the expenditure of two countries on user products in 2010.
Looking from an
overall
perspective , in the UK
consumers mostly of used cars
and books but this
year determiner of use perfume. France the useless on their leisure time cameras and perfume but, the biggest source of cars
.
If we look at the UK
, the most used products of cars
and books but cars
are better than a book in
50,000 pounds sterling. Are Computers almost equal in two countriesChange preposition
for
.
Change the punctuation
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In addition
, you can see in France the least of the products its cameras, but we can see that the perfume is better than the
Change preposition
in the
UK
. Books in the UK
are 400,000 pounds sterling but, a smaller amoSubmitted by mawka974 on
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