The chart below shows the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010.

The chart below shows the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010.
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The chart gives information on the expenditure of two countries on user products in 2010. Looking from an
overall
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perspective , in the
UK
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consumers mostly of used
cars
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and books but
this
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year determiner of use perfume. France the useless on their leisure time cameras and perfume but, the biggest source of
cars
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. If we look at the
UK
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, the most used products of
cars
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and books but
cars
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are better than a book
in
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50,000 pounds sterling. Are Computers almost equal in two countries
.
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In addition
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, you can see in France the least of the products its cameras, but we can see that the perfume is better than
the
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in the
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UK
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. Books in the
UK
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are 400,000 pounds sterling but, a smaller amo
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words uk, cars with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • expenditure
  • consumer goods
  • chart
  • countries
  • overall
  • compare
  • analyze
  • categories
  • consumer spending
  • trends
  • proportions
  • statistics
  • increase
  • decrease
  • significant
  • notable
  • remarkable
  • substantial
  • considerable
  • determine
  • conclude
  • in conclusion
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