A friend of yours recently gave you a nice birthday present. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, – thank her for the present and say why you particularly like it – describe some other presents that you received – explain some of the things you did on your birthday.

Dear Anna, Glad to hear from you, and thank you for your wonderful birthday gift.
That is
an amazing photo album of our school time photos. I am glad to say
this
is one of the best gifts I received in my life. ,Thanks again for bringing me back to those wonderful days. My dad gifted
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a holiday trip to London, I am so excited to go to London and explore the city. I will call you for some travel information. John gave me a white coloured wooden made classic piano i. It's simply beautiful.
This
birthday I celebrated with my parents, a few relatives and friends. We went to the beachside restaurant for dinner in Alaska. The food was amazing. Late night we went to a pub with my few friends. Should come to my home and stay some days. Let me know what you are thinking. Warm regards, Manshad
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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  • unique qualities
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