A friend of yours recently gave you a nice birthday present. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, – thank her for the present and say why you particularly like it – describe some other presents that you received – explain some of the things you did on your birthday.

Dear Anna, Glad to hear from you, and thank you for your wonderful birthday gift.
That is
an amazing photo album of our school time photos. I am glad to say
is one of the best gifts I received in my life. ,Thanks again for bringing me back to those wonderful days. My dad gifted
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a holiday trip to London, I am so excited to go to London and explore the city. I will call you for some travel information. John gave me a white coloured wooden made classic piano i. It's simply beautiful.
birthday I celebrated with my parents, a few relatives and friends. We went to the beachside restaurant for dinner in Alaska. The food was amazing. Late night we went to a pub with my few friends. Should come to my home and stay some days. Let me know what you are thinking. Warm regards, Manshad
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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