The maps below show the village of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010. Summaries the information and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The maps below show the village of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010. Summaries the information and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
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The provided maps demonstrate the countryside area of Stokeford between 1930 and 2010. The essay describes the main features and comparisons where needed.
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, a comparison of the two maps reveals a complete transformation of a largely rural to a mainly urban residential space. With regards to Stokeford in 1930, there was a different sort of farmland with numerous animals in the Stoke Riverside region and the northeast open area. The most interesting was that a large house & gardens were situated on the
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of the road on the south
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. The centre of the region was established by some shops, one post office and a school.
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, only one road crossed the area from the South to the North direction
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it intersected the Stoke River by a small bridge.
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, Most of the Stokeford farmland was demolished by huge residential areas in 2010.
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reason, there were no animals available in 2010. Astonishingly, The large house was replaced by a retirement home and the garden vanished on the South
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, the post office and institution remained in the same region but the academy building was well-furnished rather than the previous time. The most prominent change was that Some new house was built on the
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of Stoke River and the
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of educational institutions with a small path.
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, the one main road located in the same direction which crossed the river by a bridge in 2010.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words side with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "comparisons" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • transformed
  • residential development
  • commercial expansion
  • infrastructure enhancement
  • green spaces/areas
  • urbanization
  • public amenities
  • heritage sites
  • land use
  • demolished
  • erected
  • renovated
  • preservation
  • relocated
  • accessibility
  • connectivity
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