The maps below show the village of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010. Summaries the information and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The provided maps demonstrate the countryside area of Stokeford between 1930 and 2010. The essay describes the main features and comparisons where needed.
Overall
, a comparison of the two maps reveals a complete transformation of a largely rural to a mainly urban residential space.
With regards to Stokeford in 1930, there was a different sort of farmland with numerous animals in the Stoke Riverside region and the northeast open area. The most interesting was that a large house & gardens were situated on the side
of the road on the south side
. The centre of the region was established by some shops, one post office and a school. In addition
, only one road crossed the area from the South to the North direction then
it intersected the Stoke River by a small bridge.
On the other hand
, Most of the Stokeford farmland was demolished by huge residential areas in 2010. Due to
this
reason, there were no animals available in 2010. Astonishingly, The large house was replaced by a retirement home and the garden vanished on the South side
. However
, the post office and institution remained in the same region but the academy building was well-furnished rather than the previous time. The most prominent change was that Some new house was built on the side
of Stoke River and the side
of educational institutions with a small path. Finally
, the one main road located in the same direction which crossed the river by a bridge in 2010.Submitted by jonahid.stu20ju on
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