some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that miney could be better spent elsewhere. To what extend do you agree with this view?

These days, most
companies
require some important things to develop them. It means that it is applying some personal data to everyone to get a specific job ,
for example
, who is married or single,
also
their hobbies and interests which some people guess to think is
that is
right things.
However
, others believe that personal information is not useful for
companies
. In
this
essay, I will discuss both aspects and I will illustrate my opinion of which is better. On the one hand,
to begin
with, there are many positive impacts which some
companies
require some personal information from people who want to work for these
companies
. It means that they want to know who is married or single as well .
Therefore
they have special skills and interests.
For example
, an accounting job requires a person who has strong skills and knowledge.
In addition
, he can travel at any time, and
also
stay a long time in the working or office.
On the other hand
, some people see that when
companies
know more personal information about anyone it is not right because the knowledge is not useful for developing the place of work.
For example
: a mother has two children when teams know
this
woman is married.
As a result
. It does not give her a business because they think who does not stay a long time working?
Nevertheless
, the mother strongly wants a career because wants to buy the main things for their children and she wants to have a salary. In conclusion, for all the stuff mentioned, there are merits and demerits. From my standpoint,
companies
must know data for everyone who wants
this
job. It means that the company will be strong among many
companies
in the world.
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