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the table shows the average time and money spent at different types of restaurants

the table shows the average time and money spent at different types of restaurants
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The table depicts the average expenditure and the amount of
time
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 invested at three distinct eating points.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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 the basic cost spent at
dinner
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 in three areas cafe, dine-in, and fast
food
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 restaurants was maximum
in contrast
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 to the expenditure of
lunch
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 at the same places.
However
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, the
time
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 invested in Junk
food
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 shops was exactly the same for both
lunch
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 and
dinner
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.
According to
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 the table, Sit-Down Restaurants earned much profit during the nighttime with an average of 17
dollars
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 because
lunch
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 was cheaper at the price of 10
dollars
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.
Likewise
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, in the coffee shops people spent money around 7
dollars
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 during the afternoon and it rose by 2.50
dollars
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 for
dinner
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 consumption. For the fast
food
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 point, there was a minimal difference in the cost of
dinner
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 from 4.50 to 5
dollars
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. Meanwhile, the
time
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 consumed at
dinner
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 for both the dine-in restaurant and the cafeteria was 15 minutes extra as compared to the
time
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 taken for getting
lunch
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 with 45 and 30 minutes respectively. Whilst, only 20 minutes were spent on junk
food
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 shops for each meal.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words time, dinner, food, lunch, dollars with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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