Chris have invited you to surprise birthday party. Write a letter to Chris's parents. In your letter •say why you think Chris will enjoy the surprise party •explain why you wont be able to attend the party •Give details of a plan to see Chris at a different time.

Hello Mr and Mrs Smith, hope you
guys
are doing well. First of all, Congratulations on
Chris
's
birthday
. You
guys
are
such
cool parents.
Further
Chris
always countdowns to his
birthday
so for sure he will enjoy and like
this
birthday
surprise.
Furthermore
, you
guys
have made a lot of arrangements to make his day special and awesome like inviting
Chris
's friends, co-workers and relatives.
However
, he is getting his favourite car as a
birthday
gift, after that, he will be on the seventh cloud. I would love you
join
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Chris
's
birthday
party but Unfortunately, I will be unable to attend
this
party because at the same time, I have one of the most important meetings with my client and I cannot cancel that. Sorry for that but we
guys
have another plan,
the
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upcoming weekend.
Hence
, we have booked a resort in Muskoka Lakeshore.
Also
, have a few plans for that day like swimming, boating and camping.
Moreover
, for the night we are going clubbing. Hope you
guys
enjoy the party. Best wishes Tumi
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coherence cohesion
Try to ensure that each paragraph sticks to one main idea for better clarity.
task achievement
Elaborate slightly on why the weekend plan will be enjoyable to better align with the task’s request for details.
task achievement
The letter maintains a friendly and positive tone, making it suitable for writing to Chris's parents.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing are properly included, maintaining a polite and complete format.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

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