Some people think that schools should select students according to their academic ability or others believe that it is a better to have a student with the different abilities study together discuss both the views and give your opinion

Everybody knows that

education

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the education

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system

is so important to develop countries or people.

some

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educated's

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person and schools want to select successful students actually every school prefer

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style

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nowadays. İ strongly believe that it is the correct and best way to keep to

best

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learning

system

. There are some reasons and

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essay going to discuss them.

First,

there are many types of people in the world who are some bad and good, schools are similar, there are many successful students and

unsccessful

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unsuccessful

. Unfortunately, they can affect their study,

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or

chousing

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. That's why we should

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separate

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those who are successful.

This

is the best way protect to successfully students successfully.

For example

, my friend's son was so good in school. My friend's family had to move to another city for his job and the son had to change his school

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the son decreased his success by day

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. Because he had many bad friends there. One day,

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's persons may do

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such

as selecting only the best

student

who has a special

ability

.

Second,

some countries have

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for their

education

system

that are strong in the world. They know, every people have differing

ability

.

For

this

reason, they

toprefer

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to prefer

prefer

select to

student

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according

to according

their

ability

.

For instance

, if a

student

has

ability

in

futbool

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football

, the

student

should go to the section of the sport. He can be successful which the department loves.

To sum up

, everybody is not similar, they have different careers, abilities and values.

Therefore

,

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the education

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system

has to separate every

student

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according

to according

ability

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to ability

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.

İn

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In

my opinion,

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countries become successful thanks to

this

. İf we want to get more informatation, we can look educatation sistem of Finlandia. Because they are the best in the world.