The chart below shows global sales of the top five mobile phone brands between 2009 and 2013.

The chart below shows global sales of the top five mobile phone brands between 2009 and 2013.
The given chart compares the number of cellular phones sold by 5 different brands worldwide from 2009 to 2013. In general, there was an upward tendency in the revenue of Samsung and Apple;
in addition
, ZTE was always the least popular phone manufacturer. As can be seen from the bar chart, Samsung experienced a stark shift in the figure for customers who demand smartphones, which increased from over 200m
units
to nearly 450m
units
after 4 years.
This
means Samsung overtook all remaining characters to become the most prevalent brand.
Similarly
, the money Apple got from selling mobile phones was just 3 million
units
in 2009. after which it reached its highest point in 2013 at approximately 150m
units
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2013 and ranked third among the most desired brands.
In contrast
, in 2009, Nokia was the best seller in the global mobile phone market and
then
it witnessed a remarkable decrease in sales in 2011 ( 430m
units
) and 2013 ( shy of 250m
units
). Shared the comparable trend, LG's total sales declined by 40
m
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million
units
, ending the researched year with 80 million
units
. Meanwhile, ZTE stayed unchanged with a number of sales was not more than 100 million
units
.
This
brand was not as popular as other brands in the mobile phone market.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words m, units with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Global sales
  • Mobile phone brands
  • Market share
  • Trends
  • Growth
  • Decline
  • Technological advancements
  • Innovation
  • Consumer preferences
  • Demographics
  • Market dominance
  • Brand loyalty
  • Comparative analysis
  • Sales figures
  • Data interpretation
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