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the development of tourism contributed to english becoming the most prominent language in the world.Some people think this will lead to becoming the only language to be spoken globally. what are the advantages and disadvantages to having one language in the world ?

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Over the
last
 few ,decades there has been a significant increase in the usage of the
English
language
. Some individuals believe that
English
 will become the only speech used in the world in the coming years.
This
 essay will discuss the merits and demerits of using one
language
 globally. To embark on, there are several benefits if we use a single
language
 all over the world.
Firstly
, communication will be easier among people in despite of their national
language
.
For instance
, an American can speak
English
 even if he is in India,where the national accent is Hindi.
Secondly
, the usage of applications for translation purposes would be reduced,
hence
, can save time
instead
 of wasting it for conversion purposes.
On the other hand
, popularity in
English
 can lead to the demolishment of many mother tongue
languages
, which can directly affect each country's own culture. Many
languages
 are more than 100 years of age and they are traditionally handed over to the next generation. The influence of
English
 will affect those local
languages
, and
as a result
 of
this
, the new generation will not be aware of their traditional
languages
. Having analysed the above facts it can be concluded that using a single
language
 can have its own pros and cons. It is been clear that using a common
language
 will help communication without any complications ,
also
 it can
also
 reduce the use of some applications.
However
, using a common
language
 can be a threat to many
languages
. In ,short we can say usage of a single accent should be promoted at the same time native
languages
 should be conserved.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Prominent
  • Contribute
  • Global
  • Advantages
  • Disadvantages
  • Communication
  • Understanding
  • Ease
  • Business
  • Trade
  • Cultural exchange
  • Unity
  • Access
  • Information
  • Simplify
  • Travel
  • Tourism
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