One of your friends in a foreign country is starting an import-export business, and he has asked you to recommend a product from your country to him. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, -Say what product you want to recommend to him – Tell him/her where he/she can get this product – Explain why you want to recommend this product

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Dear Ron, I hope

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letter finds you in radiant health and it has been a long time since I heard back from you. I am proud of you as I heard that you have planned to start an import-export

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, I feel honoured as you are asking me to recommend the items which will be suitable for

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business

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. As far as I am concerned, traditional spices and snacks will be the best choice and I have good contacts with the suppliers of these items.

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, it will be helpful for you as I have trustworthy people in contact.

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, my uncle is

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doing

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business

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in the city of Dhaka, Bangladesh, and he is running his

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very successfully. I am recommending these products because the food and traditional spices are the items that people miss when they are in a foreign country.

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, if the quality of the products is good,

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the

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of food never shuts down as food is a basic need. I hope you will like my suggestions. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Best wishes, Mahmood

faisalmahamoodMon Jan 15 2024

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coherence cohesion

Ensure that each paragraph presents a clear and distinct idea or argument relevant to the task.

task achievement

Expand on the main points with sufficient detail to fully address the task requirements.

task achievement

While the response is mostly complete, providing more detail on where exactly your friend can get the products and perhaps how to ensure the quality could enhance the letter.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

191 words

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