One of your friends in a foreign country is starting an import-export business, and he has asked you to recommend a product from your country to him. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, -Say what product you want to recommend to him – Tell him/her where he/she can get this product – Explain why you want to recommend this product
Dear Ron,
I hope
this
letter finds you in radiant health and it has been a long time since I heard back from you. I am proud of you as I heard that you have planned to start an import-export business
. Moreover
, I feel honoured as you are asking me to recommend the items which will be suitable for this
business
.
As far as I am concerned, traditional spices and snacks will be the best choice and I have good contacts with the suppliers of these items. Therefore
, it will be helpful for you as I have trustworthy people in contact. In addition
to this
, my uncle is also
doing this
business
in the city of Dhaka, Bangladesh, and he is running his business
very successfully.
I am recommending these products because the food and traditional spices are the items that people miss when they are in a foreign country. Additionally
, if the quality of the products is good, then
the business
of food never shuts down as food is a basic need.
I hope you will like my suggestions. I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Best wishes,
MahmoodSubmitted by faisalmahamood on
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Ensure that each paragraph presents a clear and distinct idea or argument relevant to the task.
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Expand on the main points with sufficient detail to fully address the task requirements.
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While the response is mostly complete, providing more detail on where exactly your friend can get the products and perhaps how to ensure the quality could enhance the letter.
