The table shows information about spending money on some items in 2002.

The table shows information about spending money on some items in 2002.
The table depicts the data about the consumerism of goods
such
as food/drinks/tobacco, clothing/footwear,
leisure
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and leisure
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/education in five European countries (Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden, Turkey) in the period 2002.
Overall
, the most popular way of spending money was food/drinks/tobacco,
moreover
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,moreover
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Turkey was the leader who
spend
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spent
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more than the rest over 30 per
cent
on
such
items. In comparison, Sweden was not
so
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as
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keen as Tukey or Ireland (just under 30 per
cent
) on food/drinks/tobacco and paid twice less just a little over 15%. The next category was clothing/footwear, as can be seen from the table, all five countries spent no more than 10 per
cent
.
In addition
, Italian dwellers paid 9 per
cent
,
while
Swedish less by nearly 30 per
cent
(5.4 per
cent
, respectively). The least famous consumer spending was leisure/education.
Furthermore
, Turkish people preferred to pay slightly over 4 per
cent
, but Spanish the only just under 2 per
cent
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "such".
Vocabulary: Replace the words cent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just under" was used 2 times.
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