Many people feel it is a waste of money to try to save endangered animal species, for example the tiger or the blue whale. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?

#people #waste #money #species #tiger #whale

The argument of saving endangered animal

species

is a complex debate.

While

some agree that it is a waste of money, I agree with those who believe that it isn’t. I’m going to discuss

this

topic in depth on my essay below.

Firstly

, there are people who believe that it’s not worth it to “waste money” saving animal

species

rather than using them for more serious reasons that affect our society,

such

as: climate change, wars, global pollution, and so on… on the one hand, I agree that there are several issues that affect our planet and

consequently

us (human beings), but

on the other hand

, the fault of why

this

animal

species

are in danger is ours, and in many cases it’s a consequence of all the problems I listed before.

Secondly

, there are people who care about

this

topic as much as others, without thinking that other things are less important, but putting it on the same level. In my opinion one thing takes to another: by avoiding hunting, by looking for measures in order to solve climate change and pollution,

as a consequence

the animals

species

extinction will reduce, and in the future we won’t have to worry anymore.

For instance

, the white bear is endangered because of the climate change. But right now,

this

problem exists, and we have to act in order to save

this

animals that are important for the ecosystem.

To conclude

, I agree that there are many other reasons why the government should use money for, but saving animal

species

is not a futile issue.

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10Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

263 words

8.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.5

Complete response

6.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

endangered species
biodiversity
intrinsic value
existential threat
ecosystem
conservation
economic benefits
funding allocation
competing needs

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