Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person's culture and character from their choice of clothes.

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Dressing sense

play

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an important role in

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society these days. Many

people

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believe that they can judge

person's

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a person's

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culture and

behavior

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characteristics by the type of dress they like to wear.

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easy

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be discussed

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why I partially agreed with

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details

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. To

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, we have multiple cultures available in the world and all of them

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different

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types

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dress

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dresses

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many

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in India who

living

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in the villages

wearing

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kurtha

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kurta

and

pijamas

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pyjamas

. But the same

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live in individuals in the metro city like New Dhilli used to wear pair of jeans and shirts.

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diffrence

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difference

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understanding

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and understanding

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there

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living culture or individual

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to understand their character by their

out look

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appearances

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reason behind

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is that

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characteristics one

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many experiences which he must have faced since his childhood.

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who

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from

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childhood is

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talented and well smart person who is very selfish.

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his parents are very close with other families. In

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our way

to dress

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of dressing

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not

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help

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the

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other

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to know more about us. The essay discussed how our culture can be judged by

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clothes, but not our characteristics the same way.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
41
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

219 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

attire
fashion trends
individuality
first impressions
designer labels
social status
cultural appropriation
dress codes
traditional garments
sartorial choices
symbolism in clothing
cultural identity
expression of self
global fashion industry
cultural integration

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Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person's culture and character from their choice of clothes.

Your opinion

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