You have recently visited a building which is of historical importance and came to know that it's in bad condition. Write a letter to local newspaper office. Which building it is? What are the problems? What do you expect them to do?

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
letter to express my concern about the historical monument Taj Mahal which is located in Agra. Primarily,
last
week my friend visited the Taj Mahal to get information regarding the Mughal emperor. So, we think, it is the best place for us. During visiting, we noticed
this
place's condition was getting bad and needed to be renovated.
Furthermore
, there are numerous problems that I noticed.
Firstly
, tourists throw their waste around the mahal which affects its beauty.
Besides
this
, Marvel's colour changed
due to
a lot of pollution.
Apart from
this
, limited seats for senior tourists who enjoy the history of the Mughal period. All in all, I want you to publish that issue in the Times newspaper
then
public members will be aware and take some action to prevent
this
monument for the upcoming generation.
Moreover
, the caretaker of the building should more focus on cleanliness and provide bins to throw the waste in
instead
of around the mahal. Looking forward to your positive response. Yours sincerely, Eva Smith.
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