You have recently visited a building which is of historical importance and came to know that it's in bad condition. Write a letter to local newspaper office. Which building it is? What are the problems? What do you expect them to do?

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter to express my concern about the historical monument Taj Mahal which is located in Agra. Primarily,

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week my friend visited the Taj Mahal to get information regarding the Mughal emperor. So, we think, it is the best place for us. During visiting, we noticed

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place's condition was getting bad and needed to be renovated.

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, there are numerous problems that I noticed.

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, tourists throw their waste around the mahal which affects its beauty.

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, Marvel's colour changed

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a lot of pollution.

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, limited seats for senior tourists who enjoy the history of the Mughal period. All in all, I want you to publish that issue in the Times newspaper

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public members will be aware and take some action to prevent

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monument for the upcoming generation.

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, the caretaker of the building should more focus on cleanliness and provide bins to throw the waste in

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of around the mahal. Looking forward to your positive response. Yours sincerely, Eva Smith.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 9.0

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