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Many people think modern communication technology is having some negative effects on social relationship. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#people #communication #technology #effects #relationship
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 world has
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 in numerous ways.It is a highly debated issue that
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 technological development has deteriorated
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communication
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family members.
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 believe that through telecommunication we are able to live in
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 village. For connection,
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 use various social media channels to keep
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themselves
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 about
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each
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people
 opine that it has reduced
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physical interaction and
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 concrete
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.
However
,
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. To cite an example, if
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people
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facebook
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,
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 and
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WhatsApp
communication
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, they would not have been connected with each other across the globe. Despite
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the fact
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communication
 cannot be compensated at the expense of
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online
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technology has profound benefits
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social
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relationships
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. The various social media channels offer tremendous
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 groups which not only streamline
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 content information but
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 help in expanding the networking skills among
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distant members.
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 fusion group keep the family members informed about their daily life circumstances. In conclusion,
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 reiterate that there are sufficient grounds to reject the view that social relationships might be jeopardized by the advent of advanced
communication
 technologies. It is my genuine belief that as technology improves going forward, so will
people
's social experience.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • virtual communication
  • social fabric
  • digital divide
  • interpersonal skills
  • social networking sites
  • cyberbullying
  • digital literacy
  • online community
  • face-to-face interaction
  • emotional connection
  • non-verbal cues
  • social isolation
  • superficial engagement
  • global village
  • instant messaging
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