Social media is gradually replacing imperson face to face contact with many people worldwide. Do the benefits of social media outweigh the disadvantages?
With the advent of
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and Add an article
the internet
in
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as
result
of everyone having access to at least a mobile phone, it is now possible to talk and even see everybody wherever they are through Add an article
the result
a result
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social Correct article usage
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media
. Use synonyms
This
raises the question of whether these applications are worth reducing our Linking Words
real life
connections or Add a hyphen
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it
is better for us to stick to the old ways. I personally prefer Correct word choice
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imperson
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impersonate
impersonal
real life
conversations. Add a hyphen
real-life
Although
you can save a lot of Linking Words
time
using Use synonyms
the
social Correct article usage
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media
to connect to the outer world, it never feels real enough and eventually, it gets boring.
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Firstly
, it is not a lie if we state that social Linking Words
media
has helped humanity a lot. Indeed, if it wasn't for all these technologies, we couldn't attend the scrum Use synonyms
session
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sessions
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at
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nights
when we feel lonely in Fix the agreement mistake
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one
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our
day's
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day
job
. So, using social Fix the agreement mistake
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media
has the advantage of saving Use synonyms
time
, energy and money. Use synonyms
Also
, we would need to travel long distances to be able to meet our friends that we've missed so much. Linking Words
For instance
, my grandmother and I, call my aunt every weekend since she has moved to another country and I can really feel how much it means to my grandmother Linking Words
as well as
my aunt. Linking Words
Thus
, social networks enable us to do more work, Linking Words
have
more energy and money at the same Correct word choice
and have
time
.
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On the other hand
, Linking Words
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nothing
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usual
usually
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on
the
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sundays
. Almost everyone I know, admits that face-timing doesn't help at all when they miss someone. Change the capitalization
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Furthermore
, one cannot understand how others really feel behind their cameras Linking Words
while
you could easily tell when you meet them Linking Words
in-person
. Correct your spelling
in person
For example
, Linking Words
in
the pandemic, my friends and I called each other frequently. Change preposition
during
However
, you could feel that we were drifting apart from each other. But, the pandemic is now over and we are back together just like Linking Words
the
old days. Change preposition
in the
Hence
, communicating through social Linking Words
media
never guarantees quality Use synonyms
time
with your friends and family Use synonyms
unlike
a Add the comma(s)
,unlike
face to face
meet-up that will boost Add a hyphen
face-to-face
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.
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To conclude
, deciding between social Linking Words
media
and a good Use synonyms
old fashioned
meeting at the barAdd a hyphen
old-fashioned
,
is indeed a tough challenge. Remove the comma
apply
This
decade is called the decade of social Linking Words
media
for a good reason and we can clearly understand all the Use synonyms
time
and money it saves us. But, once you experience the distance between you and your loved ones, never in a world would you change the feeling of being in their presence with anything.Use synonyms
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