Some believe that it is the responsibility of people to take care of the environment. Others say it is the government that should take care of the environment. Discuss both views and state your opinion.
It is widely believed that
people
should take care
of the environment, while
others think that the government
is the one who is responsible for it. Although
the government
has much more resources to do it, I am a firm believer that it is everyone's responsibility and this
essay presents my own opinion on this
problem.
One of the main reasons why people
tend to think that taking care
of nature is the government
's duty is its abundance of available resources. It is much easier for authorities to invest money in a project that will ensure that nature is protected since individuals do not own this
huge amount of money. Moreover
, they have the power to restrict any pollution by implementing new laws which will result in the reduction of pollution. For example
, in Kazakhstan, the government
plays a pivotal role in maintaining a healthy environment since there are many taxes which ensure that people
take care
of the environment.
In contrast
, there is a firm belief that it is people
's responsibility to do it since there are more than 8 billion people
on the Earth and their impacts all add up to the cumulative effect. There is no doubt that the total number of world population surpasses the number of people
who are the government
's inferiors. Therefore
, the cumulative effect of all these individuals will outweigh all other measures simply because there are many more of them. For instance
, there are about 10 thousand government
workers in Kazakhstan, while
its population is 20 million and it is obvious that they outweigh only 10 thousand.
In conclusion, although
the government
plays a significant role and contributes to the protection of nature because of all of its capabilities and resources, I think that it is people
's responsibility to take care
of the surroundings since they have a greater impact.Submitted by shermadovs on
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