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In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or negative development

#countries #world #people #cities #population #countryside #development
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It is indeed true that
cities
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 have more facilities than rural
areas
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. In recent times a lot of
people
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move
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have moved
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 to
cities
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 from rural
area
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areas
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 which
causes
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caused
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 the countryside population to decrease. In my
opinion
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 it is not a positive development for a
county
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country
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.
This
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people
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move
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cities
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from cities
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 to the countryside.
To begin
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 with,
cities
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 provided a good life for living but already those
people
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 who lived in
cities
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 faced various problems in their life. Housing is one of the biggest problems
of
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in
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cities
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. More and more
people
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 try to change their destination
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due
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apply
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to
living
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live
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 a good life for the reason they need more housing. Another problem is traffic jams which are increasing
day
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 by
day
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 for
people
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 moving
to
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from
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 the countryside to
cities
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.
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,
according to
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 the newspaper
prothom
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 Alo, in the
last
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 10
years
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 traffic jams have increased to twice as much as before in Bangladesh
due to
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 overpopulation in Dhaka city.
On the other hand
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, developing rural
areas
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 would be stopped when
people
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move
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 to
cities
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. The government would not care about working for real
people
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. If he was staying there, the authority should keep
focus
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the focus
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 on
this
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 area and it is highly possible to create a new employment sector in those particular
areas
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 which
helps
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would help
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 the local
people
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 to get employment.
Example
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For example
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 in Bangladesh
due to
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 our population in Dhaka city the government decided to develop rural
areas
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 and give them more facilities and create new employment for them.
To conclude
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, serious
people
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 have more
opportunity
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opportunities
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 than rural
people
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 but if everyone's tiles
move
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 It is
then
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 the country's economy would be demolished
day
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 by
day
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • rural-to-urban migration
  • population shift
  • positive impact
  • negative impact
  • urbanization
  • job opportunities
  • access to education
  • access to healthcare
  • urban infrastructure
  • rural traditions
  • cultural heritage
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