In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or negative development
It is indeed true that
cities
have more facilities than rural areas
. In recent times a lot of people
move
to Wrong verb form
have moved
cities
from rural area
which Fix the agreement mistake
areas
causes
the countryside population to decrease. In my Wrong verb form
caused
opinion
it is not a positive development for a Add a comma
,opinion
county
. Correct your spelling
country
This
essay will discuss what will happen when people
move
cities
to the countryside.
Change preposition
from cities
To begin
with, cities
provided a good life for living but already those people
who lived in cities
faced various problems in their life. Housing is one of the biggest problems of
Change preposition
in
cities
. More and more people
try to change their destination due
to Change preposition
apply
living
a good life for the reason they need more housing. Another problem is traffic jams which are increasing Wrong verb form
live
day
by day
for people
moving to
the countryside to Change preposition
from
cities
. For example
, according to
the newspaper prothom
Alo, in the Change the capitalization
Prothom
last
10 years
traffic jams have increased to twice as much as before in Bangladesh Add a comma
,years
due to
overpopulation in Dhaka city.
On the other hand
, developing rural areas
would be stopped when people
move
to cities
. The government would not care about working for real people
. If he was staying there, the authority should keep focus
on Add an article
the focus
this
area and it is highly possible to create a new employment sector in those particular areas
which helps
the local Wrong verb form
would help
people
to get employment. Example
in Bangladesh Change preposition
For example
due to
our population in Dhaka city the government decided to develop rural areas
and give them more facilities and create new employment for them.
To conclude
, serious people
have more opportunity
than rural Fix the agreement mistake
opportunities
people
but if everyone's tiles move
It is then
the country's economy would be demolished day
by day
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