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You have been working with your company for two years and are interested in a promotion. Write a letter to your direct boss. In your letter: · Explain your varied achievements over the past two years · Express your interest in growing with the company · Ask for a meeting to discuss a potential promotion

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SeDear Mr Ali, In the beginning, I would like to thank you for all the great support provided to me in the past two years. As you know I joined our company in 2021 and it is a couple of years now in the same position and grade;
accordingly
, I am writing you
this
 letter to express my interest in growing and staying much longer with our organisation.
Hence
, I am asking for a promotion to upgrade my current career level and increase my scope of work.
Firstly
, I was lucky to have the opportunity of working on many different projects with the integration of more than one department which gave me a larger scope of experience and achievements.
For example
, in 2022 I implemented the first dashboard to track actual sales on a daily basis and I received an award for
this
 project.
Secondly
, I suggest having a one-to-one meeting to discuss
this
 potential promotion and get your feedback about my request. Yours Sincerely,
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I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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