Global warming is the biggest threat we are experiencing today? To what extent do you agree or disagree?

A popular debate in today's world is whether global warming is the leading environmental threat of today or not. I completely agree that it is the most worrisome atmospheric issue at
hand
. On the one
hand
, the matter with global warming is unbearable heating of the atmosphere.
This
has detrimental effects on human survival. Excess heat in the
environment
will cause the icy parts of water bodies to melt. When
this
happens, the land available for
animals
and humans to live on will be narrowed by the expansion of the borders of waterbodies. The outcome of
such
a life is competition among humans,
animals
who live on land and plants for space to survive on. Human beings
as well as
animals
may not have enough plants providing them with
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and food.
This
will worsen the cycle as
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trees in the
environment
will worsen the problem
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global warming as the carbon dioxide released from both
animals
and man will remain in the atmosphere.
In addition
, certain disease processes are associated with overheating.
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there have been reported incidences of stroke and skin rashes resulting from excessive atmospheric heat. It is obvious from the illustrations that global warming is quite a serious issue. No wonder scientists never cease advising
government
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and individuals to take measures to combat worsening the global warming situation at
hand
. Global warming results from
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of fossil fuels that can be generated
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industries, vehicles and
burning
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of domestic waste. Another factor is deforestation. Knowing these as the sources of carbon dioxide retention in our
environment
, both individual and nationwide steps that can be employed to help with the threat at
hand
include using
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recyclable objects and
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cutting down trees. These little steps will go a long way to save our
environment
.
To sum up
, I cannot overemphasize the extent to which I agree
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the stated points that global warming is a huge environmental threat that needs to be tackled.
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