The chart below shows the amount spent on six consumer goods in four European countries.

The chart below shows the amount spent on six consumer goods in four European countries.
The bar chart illustrates the amount of money in
GBP
spent by four European countries on six different types of goods.
Overall
,
it is clear that
Britain ranks first on the total of money spent on every type of product,
while
Italy and France are the second and
third,
whereas
Germany is the least.
According to
the line graph, people from the UK spent almost £1,000 on the six products. They spend approximately
GBP
170 on photographic film and toys and around 160
GBP
on CDs and perfumes,
while
they only spend 155 pounds on tennis racquets and personal stereos. The Italians’ expenditures are a slightly different trend, they spend the most at
GBP
157 on toys and the least on stereos
while
£155 is purchased on movies, CDs, fragrances and tennis equipment.
Additionally
, the French’s expense is on film the most at £165, a little less than that amount is spent on toys and CDs,
whereas
they spend roughly 146 pounds on the rest of the products. German,
however
, purchases all items at around the same amount at
GBP
150 and gently under.
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