The lower chart depicted the percentage change of International students share among university graduates in different Canadian`s provinces between 2001 and 2006.
The lower chart depicted the percentage change
of
International Change preposition
in
students
share among university graduates in different Change noun form
student's
students'
Canadian`s
provinces between 2001 and 2006.
It can be clearly seen from the data that the most popular was Change noun form
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the
New Brunswick`s university for Correct article usage
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the
both ages, there had been Remove the article
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at
around 12% in 2006 and approximately 8% in 2001.
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By contrast
, the least favorable
place was Change the spelling
favourable
the
Ontario, Correct article usage
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in which
which
the percentage of Correct word choice
where
the
International graduates reached just Correct article usage
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the
5 per cent in 2006, and Correct article usage
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by
nearly 3 per cent in 2001.
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Also
, we can see that only a
three counties could pass the 10% mark in 2006, there are Correct article usage
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the
New Brunswick, Nova Scotia, and Correct article usage
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the
British Columbia. Correct article usage
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Whereas
, none of the regions in 2001 could hit the target of 5%, except the
New Brunswick, Nova Scotia and Correct article usage
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the
Quebec.
In general, in 2006 Correct article usage
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the
foreign learners Correct article usage
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was
more actively involved in Correct subject-verb agreement
were
the
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Canadian`s
education than the pupils in 2001.Change noun form
Canadian
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