You are moving to a new country to go to university and will need a part - time job . You have a friend who lives in that country . Write a letter to your friend . In your letter , apologise for not staying in touch explain why you're moving to this country ask your friend if he / she can help you find a job .

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Dear Dolly

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we shared a good friendship in school we weren't in touch for long.

Firstly

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, I apologize for not staying in contact with you after school.

Nevertheless

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, better late than never now life has given us an opportunity to spend plenty of time together and make more memories as I'

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moving to Canada next month.

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, Do you remember that during our 12th ,class I spilled-up my beans about the dream of studying abroad?

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, my parents were not ready to send me to another country as they had their own good reasons. Though it took a long period of 6 months to convince them. After long and long discussions and ,effort I got an appointment with a knowledgeable education advisor who told me and my family the pros and cons of pursuing studies in developed nations like Canada.

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, my loved ones agreed to send me to Canada. And to add on, the amazing part is that when they came to know about you staying there it was a relief for them for my flight to a stranger nation.

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, I'

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all set to meet you on your birthday bash and have a double celebration on these two occasions - my arrival and your turning 19. I'

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facing a small problem because I don't know the Job system there. If you can do me a favour and find one, it would be a great help. I'

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waiting to hear from you. Best regards, Geetika

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coherence cohesion

Ensure that each paragraph fully develops a single idea to enhance clarity.

task achievement

Maintain the friendly and engaging tone that you have used throughout.

coherence cohesion

The letter includes a clear greeting and closing, making it well-structured.

task achievement

The tone is friendly and suitable for writing to a friend, effectively achieving the task's purpose.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

247 words

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