These day in many countries, fewer and fewer people want to become teachers, particularly in secondary schools

In many parts of the world, there has been a sharp drop in the number of people considering teaching in

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as their future career. In my opinion, it is understandable

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the low salary of

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and the detrimental behaviour of pupils;

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, both parents and

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should tackle

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problem.

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with, one of the main causes of the issue is that

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receive a lower income than other jobs. In fact, it is not fair that

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’ salaries have not kept pace with that of other professions, namely medicine or law.

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to say, those who are passionate about teaching may not find their pay satisfied with their efforts;

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, in

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, a marketing manager will earn twice as much as a teacher with the same experience. Another reason is that pupils, nowadays, behave detrimentally in class.

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,

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pupils will make many

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feel tired and stressed, which

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a negative impact on their mental health. To solve

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burden, it is beneficial for the government to encourage by raising

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significantly.

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, with higher salaries, more and more people would like to consider teaching as their major or

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prospect. In terms of disobeyed students, parents should educate their children with a sense of respect for

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, in order to make them behave well in class.

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, the good attitude of children can act as a motive in order to attract potential

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as well. In conclusion, the low salary within the bad attitude of children are two main reasons why people are not likely to become

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; my view is that

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the main responsibility for solving the problem lies with the government and parents.