Q. You recently bought a piece of sports equipment from an online store. When you first used the piece of sports equipment, you found a problem with it. Write a letter to the manager, In your letter describe the problem with the piece of sports equipment say what happened because of the problem explain what you would like the company to do?

Dear Sir/ Madam, I am writing
letter to bring to your notice about defective badminton racket that I received from your online website. It is very unfortunate that I encountered a bad experience from
an esteemed sports brand. I ordered 2 sets of badminton rackets on 24th July, 2023 from your e-commerce website flaze.com to gift to my younger sister for her tournament.
, I was surprised to see the stringed area of the rackets was broken.
In addition
to that, there was no rubber support for the handles as well. As her tournament was scheduled the next morning, I had to rush to the nearby store to get her a new racket. To sum it up, there was a lot of hustle at the
due to
the delivery of a defective product from your end. I would like you to refund my money as these rackets are of no use.
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you the bill for your
reference. Thanking you,
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faithfully, Jones.
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