The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. 

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph chart provides information regarding how many
hours
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were spent doing house chores. The data compares figures between the years 1920 to 2019.
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, in the early ,years there are few houses with electrical
appliances
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,
therefore
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there are many
hours
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needed to accomplish a specific task.
On the other hand
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, the continuous progression of technology gives a solution to preserve more time in doing housework and
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to produce more
appliances
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that are electrically operated. In detail, in 1920, washing machines, refrigerators, and vacuum cleaners were very rare with non-existent to 40% of households having, in comparison to the length of time spent doing a house chore at least 50
hours
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per week. The comfort and speed that these
appliances
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are noticed in
such
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a way as the years continue more of these are produced. In conclusion, better outcomes are shown in terms of preserving more time when there are more
appliances
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used and with these more
hours
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can be given to accomplish other things.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words hours, appliances with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "gives" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • ownership of electrical appliances
  • steadily increased
  • dramatically decreased
  • correlating the rise
  • became common
  • households
  • prevalence
  • technological advancements
  • increased affordability
  • household chores
  • labor-saving devices
  • allocated for housework
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