The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some

tourist facilities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and

make comparisons where relevant.
The two maps give information about the changes that happened on the
island
after adding tourist facilities.
Overall
, they built four main things to transform the
island
into a tourist
island
.
Likewise
, a
pier
, reception, accommodation, and restaurant, and they specialize in the beach for swimming.
However
, they organized the
island
by making the main entrance for the resort from the sea by building a
pier
. After that, visitors can walk to the reception which is located in the middle between
pier
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, restaurant, and accommodation, and it is surrounded by a foot bath
also
connecting between the
pier
and the restaurant.
Moreover
, there is a vehicle track, to help people who booked in the resort arrive at their cabin or pick them up to the beach for swimming and tanning. As we can see from the maps, they used only 95
percent
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of the
island
for the facilities and kept the size
at
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the same.
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