Many manufactured food and drink products high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should me made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?
Health issues
is
caused by Change the verb form
are
food
products
which contain high
amount of Add an article
a high
sugar
in them. People
suggest that,
we can lessen the usage of sugary items by increasing the cost of these sugary Remove the comma
apply
products
. I disagree with this
solution because rich people
may not be encourage
to consume less Change the verb form
be encouraged
sugar
and it can create problems for poor people
as well.
By rising
the price of Change preposition
Rising
products
that are made of sugar
will not affect people
with wealth because this
thing will not stop them to purchase
sugary Change preposition
from purchasing
food
. Moreover
, sugar addicted
Add a hyphen
sugar-addicted
people
with a lot of money may stock a large quantity of sugary food
for themselves in order to overcome any type difficulty
that Change preposition
of difficulty
occur
in future. Change the verb form
occurs
For Instance
, according to
a research article, the population of millionares
in Singapore is more than 50%. So, Correct your spelling
millionaires
by
implementing the solution of expensive sugary Change preposition
apply
food
will not mitigate the utilization of sugar
products
. As a result
, this
thing will lead towards shortage of the products
due to
stock.
On the other hand
, I disagree because this
suggestion can cause problems for poor people
. Individuals who can just afford these food
items as a part of meal
for their family may suffer a lot. Add an article
the meal
a meal
Furthermore
, sometimes parents who
buy chocolates and various types of drinking juice for their children as Correct pronoun usage
apply
reward
or as Add an article
a reward
present
to see Correct article usage
a present
happiness
on their Add an article
the happiness
childrens
Correct your spelling
children's
children
face
, Fix the agreement mistake
faces
this
strategy would made
disturbance for average income families. Change the verb form
make
be made
For Example
, the solution of expensive sugary products
will disturb the citizens in a developing country with low level
income and can cause many family Add a hyphen
low-level
conundrum
. Fix the agreement mistake
conundrums
Also
, people
will
may go through Verb problem
apply
illness
related to stress and depression.
In conclusion, health problems related to sugary Fix the agreement mistake
illnesses
food
is an alarming stituation
for Correct your spelling
situation
world
and trying to decline the intake of Add an article
the world
food
items with high
Add an article
a high
percentage
of Fix the agreement mistake
percentages
sugar
by increasing the cost of the products
is not an effective idea. Because it will not encourage any class of people
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