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In the future, nobody will buy printers newspaper or books because they will be able to read everything, they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Nowadays, printed newspapers and
books
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 are off the market
due to
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 the
techonological
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technological
 advances that we have in where everything is one click away including reading articles or
books
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 for free with our own gadget. I strongly agree with the above notion and
this
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about
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it.
To begin
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 with, technology
offers
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has offered
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wide
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 array of help especially to students since
pandemic
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the pandemic
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strikes
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 in 2020. E-
books
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 and online learning
has
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 become utilized since face-to-face classes
has
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 been prohibited.
For instance
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,
instead
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 of buying
books
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 at a bookstore,
student
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the student
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 can acquire the same notes online using their own gadget even for free. Acquiring these online offers them a lot of resource materials and more information about a book
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which the internet provides.
In addition
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, carrying heavy
boooks
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books
 going to school has been outdated.
This
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 will be less hassles
to
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 pupils and
helps
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help
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 them prevent back injury in carrying overloaded bags.
Secondly
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,
people
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 can
inhibit
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 more knowledge and information easily and more
effiicient
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efficiently
 since online
news
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 reporting
are
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is
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also
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 common nowadays. So
wide
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a wide
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 range of
people
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 will be informed well through the
news
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in
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on
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 the internet
on
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in
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 a timely manner. As long as the
news
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 site is legit and trusted,
people
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 can be aware anytime and anywhere
on
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of
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 the issues
wordwide
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worldwide
 using their own cellphones unlike before only
few
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knows
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know
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 the
some
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information..
To sum up
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, I strongly agree that
people
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 now are more
incline
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on reading
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to read
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news
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 and
books
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 online since it is more convenient,
budget friendly
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 for free subscriptions
books
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 and more efficient. Printed
books
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 and newspapers may still be
patronize
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patronised
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 but declining its consumer in the near future.
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