Bar chart. The bar chart illustrates information about how two age groups of adults participate in different clubs by showing the number of people.
The bar chart illustrates information about how two age groups of adults participate in different clubs by showing the
number
of people
.
Overall
, there are two trends visible: arts and crafts with the "Other" group is more popular among the young generation, while
historical club is more attended by the elderly. The rest of the clubs have the same or similar number
of participants.
There are 60 young members in the arts and crafts in comparison with the people
who are 45–65 showing three times less attendance. The group "Other" has nearly as many young people
as arts, but the number
of elders is halved. By contrast
, history club appeal more old generation showing a double number
of old people
.
Archeology, keeping fit, and social hobbies are popular among both age group. Archeology has exactly the same members—45 people
. Rest two have approximately the same trend: both clubs are slightly more popular among those who are 20–30.Submitted by dnm.best on
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