write a letter to an english speaking friend in your letter . explain why you changed job? describe your new job? tell him your other news

Dear Dan, Hi!
is Jesy from India ,hope you remember our
conversation about a job as a teacher . Everything is moving smoothly on my side.,
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I received some information about your success in your project . I am so proud of you ,keep doing well , yes,you are on the right track . As a teacher am have too much work. I have to stand for 8 periods . Since I have a left leg injury . ,
doctor recommended I not stand for a long period . ,
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I need to change my job . So I registered a website as an online tutor . Even though I am comfortable teaching online. Since I am missing my school students and
the environment, I wish to recover soon . As an online ,tutor I need to use a laptop ,so it is a considerable one for my platform. After my ,recovery I will join France University as a Ph.D. scholar. My ambition is to get a PhD in sociology . So, keep me in your prayers . Thank you. Yours faithfully Jesy
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