Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Somepeople believe that it is too late to do something while others believe that actions can be taken to improve the situation. Discuss both the perspectives and give your opinion.
In our world, the activity of one living thing affects the other.
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has raised an argument among people about whether or not the negative impact human Linking Words
activities
have on plants and Use synonyms
animals
is remediable or not. Use synonyms
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essay seeks to discuss both opinions. Meanwhile, my stance on Linking Words
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matter is, that whilst some of our bad habits on these creatures can be reversed, others cannot. On the one hand, human Linking Words
activities
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such
as air pollution and illegal mining cause irreversible harm to Linking Words
trees
and Use synonyms
animals
. Use synonyms
For instance
, it is widely known that burning fossil fuels releases toxic substances into the atmosphere that worsen the already existing global situation Linking Words
on
global warming situation. Unfortunately, it is impossible to take back carbon dioxide that has already been released into the atmosphere. Rather, it stays there and destroys living creatures Change preposition
of
such
as plants and causes the meltage of glaciers or oceans disrupting the ecosystem. Linking Words
Also
, mining Linking Words
that is
carried out by digging deep into the ground destroys our lands and Linking Words
waterbodies
. These lands lose their Correct your spelling
water bodies
purposes
for planting Fix the agreement mistake
purpose
trees
and displace Use synonyms
animals
from their breeding grounds. These illustrations Use synonyms
makes
it clear that some harmful human Change the verb form
make
activities
with deleterious environmental effects can never be salvageable. Use synonyms
On the other hand
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however
, deforestation and land pollution are Linking Words
also
well-known human acts on the environment that can be reversed. Research has it that, growing Linking Words
trees
can replace and even outnumber those that were cut down. To cite an example is the national policy passed by the Ghana government that each household should grow 2 Use synonyms
trees
in their compound to promote aforestation. It is Use synonyms
also
possible to clear filth that was improperly disposed of land and rid them of through appropriate means. Linking Words
Thus
, it is apparent that some of our unpleasant effects on the environment can be worked on to improve the impact. Linking Words
To sum up
, I strongly believe that some human Linking Words
activities
on other creatures Use synonyms
such
as plants and Linking Words
animals
cause irreversible effects whilst others can be salvaged.Use synonyms
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion