Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Somepeople believe that it is too late to do something while others believe that actions can be taken to improve the situation. Discuss both the perspectives and give your opinion.
In our world, the activity of one living thing affects the other.
This
has raised an argument among people about whether or not the negative impact human activities
have on plants and animals
is remediable or not. This
essay seeks to discuss both opinions. Meanwhile, my stance on this
matter is, that whilst some of our bad habits on these creatures can be reversed, others cannot. On the one hand, human activities
such
as air pollution and illegal mining cause irreversible harm to trees
and animals
. For instance
, it is widely known that burning fossil fuels releases toxic substances into the atmosphere that worsen the already existing global situation on
global warming situation. Unfortunately, it is impossible to take back carbon dioxide that has already been released into the atmosphere. Rather, it stays there and destroys living creatures Change preposition
of
such
as plants and causes the meltage of glaciers or oceans disrupting the ecosystem. Also
, mining that is
carried out by digging deep into the ground destroys our lands and waterbodies
. These lands lose their Correct your spelling
water bodies
purposes
for planting Fix the agreement mistake
purpose
trees
and displace animals
from their breeding grounds. These illustrations makes
it clear that some harmful human Change the verb form
make
activities
with deleterious environmental effects can never be salvageable. On the other hand
, however
, deforestation and land pollution are also
well-known human acts on the environment that can be reversed. Research has it that, growing trees
can replace and even outnumber those that were cut down. To cite an example is the national policy passed by the Ghana government that each household should grow 2 trees
in their compound to promote aforestation. It is also
possible to clear filth that was improperly disposed of land and rid them of through appropriate means. Thus
, it is apparent that some of our unpleasant effects on the environment can be worked on to improve the impact. To sum up
, I strongly believe that some human activities
on other creatures such
as plants and animals
cause irreversible effects whilst others can be salvaged.Submitted by nmaureen03 on
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion