Nowadays men’s sport is given far more attention in the3 society then women sports. What are the reasons and do you think is it a positive or negative situation?
Even in
modern
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the modern
word
, there is a misconception that Correct your spelling
world
prioritize
men’s Change the verb form
prioritizes
sport
from
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over
women
and give them more attention as a result
. This
essay will untangle the causality of this
idea and I think it is not fair.
This
is sad but true that sports and rigorous exercise are typically connect
to men’s world since ancient days. Change the verb form
are typically connected
For instance
, in Greek, and prehistoric cultures most of Gods
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the Gods
represented
in Add a missing verb
are represented
man
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man's
gender
. Moreover
, these metaphoric creatures usually possess extraordinary power related to saving human lives and this
power achieved
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is achieved
from
rigorous exercise and Change preposition
through
sport
activities. Change the noun form
sports
While
, at the same time their wives used to take the responsibility of upbringing their child and they were mostly occupied with households. Consequently
, the concept of physical activities and men show strong connection.
I personally reckon this
believe
is faulty and there is nothing positive about it. To clarify, the idea Replace the word
belief
convey
the exact meaning of Change the verb form
conveys
gender
discrimination while
,
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apply
women
have always fought for their primitive rights against gender
bias and prejudice
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prejudiced
behavior
. Change the spelling
behaviour
As a result
, they deserve more attention and encouragement in Correct article usage
the sport
sport
realm to show their abilities. To clarify, Change the noun form
sports
sport
events bring numerous opportunities for Change the noun form
sports
women
to represent and prove their strength and defeat old stereotypes related to men
sports.
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men's
To conclude
, the gender
prejudice behind sport
is rooted in our history and it is absolutely an ordeal to change the game Fix the agreement mistake
sports
in
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on
women
’s side. Also
, women
need more space to change this
perception and validate their potential strength.Submitted by diana_ft91 on
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