Over population of urban areas has led to numerous problems. identify 1-2 serious ones, and suggest ways in which the government and individuals can tackle these problems

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Nowadays,
cities
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are becoming bigger
due to
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development and it has caused a great number of troubles.
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is mainly attributable to
over
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over-immigration
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immigration
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and public transportation and can be solved by decentralizing facilities and enforcing laws by
government
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the government
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.
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with, there are a lot of
facilites
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facilities
in big
cities
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and because of
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reason
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many
people
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come to metropolitan
cities
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to take
advatange
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advantage
of the amenities.
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results in, over
immigration
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of
people
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from rural areas to urban areas and the
cities
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may become crowded and polluted and the traffic will become bumper to bumper.
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, public transportation is considered
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a beneficial issue. Poor
qulity
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quality
of the means of transportation has caused numerous problems.
People
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are rather reluctant to use trains,subways and cabs.
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result
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a result
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, there is heavy traffic in
cities
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especially during rush hours. Many practical measures can be taken by government to tackle these issues.
First,
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authorities should decentralize the facilities to stop
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over-immigration
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immigration
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.
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,
people
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will not leave their homes in the hope of finding a better job.
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, they will stay
at
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in
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their
cities
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and villages.
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it should form new laws
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moving from small
cities
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to big ones. In
this
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case,
government
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the government
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can control the rate of
immigration
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and stop the
over
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over-immigration
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immigration
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.
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the metropolitan
cities
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are not as crowded as they are now. By way of conclusion,
this
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essay discussed the principal causes of
over population
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overpopulation
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which are lack of amenities and lack of
apropiate
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appropriate
of governing and the ways to solve them.
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