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The line graph provides information about 3 kinds of spreads that are consumed over the 26-year period. The data were measured in grams.

The line graph provides information about 3 kinds of spreads that are consumed over the 26-year period. The data were measured in grams.
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The line graph provides information about 3 kinds of spreads that are consumed over the 26-year
period
. The data were measured in grams.
Overall
, the
consumption
 of
butter
 relatively decreased,
as well as
 margarine.
In contrast
 with low fat and reduced spread that was a noticeable increase.
To begin
 with,
total
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consumption
 of
butter
 started at the highest point
then
 dropped to the second position in the
last
period
. In the first 5-year
period
, there was a growth from just over 140 to just under 160.
However
, in the next
period
 until the end of the observation, it declined significantly and reached its lowest
consumption
, accounting for around 50. Nearly similar to
butter
, the
consumption
 of margarine dropped to the dip. For the first 10 years, it experienced fluctuation and reached the same amount as
butter
. After that, it stood at the same point before going down from 100 to 40. Interestingly, low fat and reduced spread that
confirmed
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at
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 1998 made up approximately 10 grams
start
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 to
increased
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 enormously and overlapped
butter
 and margarine,
although
 it declined
at the end
 of
period
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the period
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 but it still
on
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in
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 the top position.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words period, consumption, butter with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reduced" was used 2 times.
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