The line graph provides information about 3 kinds of spreads that are consumed over the 26-year period. The data were measured in grams.
The line graph provides information about 3 kinds of spreads that are consumed over the 26-year
period
. The data were measured in grams.
Use synonyms
Overall
, the Linking Words
consumption
of Use synonyms
butter
relatively decreased, Use synonyms
as well as
margarine. Linking Words
In contrast
with low fat and reduced spread that was a noticeable increase.
Linking Words
To begin
with, Linking Words
total
Correct article usage
the total
consumption
of Use synonyms
butter
started at the highest point Use synonyms
then
dropped to the second position in the Linking Words
last
Linking Words
period
. In the first 5-year Use synonyms
period
, there was a growth from just over 140 to just under 160. Use synonyms
However
, in the next Linking Words
period
until the end of the observation, it declined significantly and reached its lowest Use synonyms
consumption
, accounting for around 50.
Nearly similar to Use synonyms
butter
, the Use synonyms
consumption
of margarine dropped to the dip. For the first 10 years, it experienced fluctuation and reached the same amount as Use synonyms
butter
. After that, it stood at the same point before going down from 100 to 40. Interestingly, low fat and reduced spread that Use synonyms
confirmed
Add a missing verb
was confirmed
at
1998 made up approximately 10 grams Change preposition
in
start
to Wrong verb form
started
increased
enormously and overlapped Wrong verb form
increase
butter
and margarine, Use synonyms
although
it declined Linking Words
at the end
of Linking Words
Use synonyms
period
but it still Add an article
the period
on
the top position.Change preposition
in
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Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reduced" was used 2 times.
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