The line graph provides information about 3 kinds of spreads that are consumed over the 26-year period. The data were measured in grams.
The line graph provides information about 3 kinds of spreads that are consumed over the 26-year
period
. The data were measured in grams.
Overall
, the consumption
of butter
relatively decreased, as well as
margarine. In contrast
with low fat and reduced spread that was a noticeable increase.
To begin
with, total
Correct article usage
the total
consumption
of butter
started at the highest point then
dropped to the second position in the last
period
. In the first 5-year period
, there was a growth from just over 140 to just under 160. However
, in the next period
until the end of the observation, it declined significantly and reached its lowest consumption
, accounting for around 50.
Nearly similar to butter
, the consumption
of margarine dropped to the dip. For the first 10 years, it experienced fluctuation and reached the same amount as butter
. After that, it stood at the same point before going down from 100 to 40. Interestingly, low fat and reduced spread that confirmed
Add a missing verb
was confirmed
at
1998 made up approximately 10 grams Change preposition
in
start
to Wrong verb form
started
increased
enormously and overlapped Wrong verb form
increase
butter
and margarine, although
it declined at the end
of period
but it still Add an article
the period
on
the top position.Change preposition
in
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