The maps illustrate an industrial area in Norbiton in the present day compared with plans for future development of the site.
The maps illustrate the changes between the current and future conditions of an industrial
area
in the town of Norbition
. As clearly seen, the Correct your spelling
Nutrition
area
will be transformed from being for manufacturing purposes by having many factories to a residential area
with a lot of housing.
Firstly
, at the moment, there are only factories and vacant land. The area
is separated from the North farmland by a river. However
, according to
the plan, the factories will be removed completely and more accommodations will be built to replace them. Moreover
, presently, there is only a main roundabout but in the future, the development of the traffic system will consist of a smaller roundabout connecting to the initial one and 2 additional roads heading North and North West. There will be also
a new road going over the river to bridge the main site and the farmland.
Secondly
, with the expansion of the living area
, more places serving as mere sustenance will be built such
as schools, shops, playgrounds,s and Medical centers
. Some of these will be built in replacement of the current factory location.Change the spelling
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