The maps illustrate an industrial area in Norbiton in the present day compared with plans for future development of the site.

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The maps illustrate the changes between the current and future conditions of an industrial

area

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in the town of

Norbition

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Nutrition

. As clearly seen, the

area

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will be transformed from being for manufacturing purposes by having many factories to a residential

area

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with a lot of housing.

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, at the moment, there are only factories and vacant land. The

area

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is separated from the North farmland by a river.

However

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according to

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the plan, the factories will be removed completely and more accommodations will be built to replace them.

Moreover

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, presently, there is only a main roundabout but in the future, the development of the traffic system will consist of a smaller roundabout connecting to the initial one and 2 additional roads heading North and North West. There will be

also

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a new road going over the river to bridge the main site and the farmland.

Secondly

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, with the expansion of the living

area

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, more places serving as mere sustenance will be built

such

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as schools, shops, playgrounds,s and Medical

centers

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centres

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. Some of these will be built in replacement of the current factory location.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words area with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "illustrate" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

183 words

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