A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for his/her. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter tell your friend about the job and what sort of work it involves say why you think the job would be suitable for him/her explain how to apply for the job You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear...............,

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Dear Annie, Hope you are doing well. I'm writing

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to let you know about the

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that I found for you in Accenture. It's a finance-related

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where you'

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have to do reconciliations and prepare journal entries during month ends. The

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will be from home but you'

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have to visit the office occasionally. Plus, the shift timings are 9 am to 5 pm, which I think is suitable for you. Since you're a Chartered Accountant, I thought that it's a perfect opportunity for you. In fact, they urgently need a Chartered Accountant for preparing reconciliations, which gives you an edge over other candidates .

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, they're giving ten lac rupees per annum salary, I reckon it's a handsome amount considering your qualifications. You can apply for the

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through the company's portal, and I made a call to their HR she told me to leave an email with your CV to let them contact you easily. I'

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attach their email and contact details. Hope you'

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find

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useful. Best regards, Jaskaran

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

173 words

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Millions of dollars are spent on space research every year. Some people argue that the money should be spent on improving living standard on Earth. Do you agree or disagree?

Tobacco should be treated as illegal like other drugs. Smoking has not a single positive issue but lots of negative effects and therefore, it should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement.

Some people like to own the place where they live, but other people like to rent where they live. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many people feel that media coverage has become increasingly biased today. Why is this? What can be done to fix this problem?

Nowadays many young people are drawn towards dangerous sports. What makes them so attractive? What measures should be taken to regulate such sports and minimise the risks?