The graph below shows the changing patterns of access to modern technology in homes in the UK. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The following graph depicts the accessibility of different modern technology items in homes in the UK between 1994 and 2008. Those items include
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CD
player, Correct article usage
a CD
DVD
player, mobile phone and Internet connection.
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Overall
, we can observe Linking Words
upward
trend in the patterns of access of each item on the illustration. The Add an article
an upward
least
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lowest
percentage
of people had Use synonyms
DVD
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players
in their household in 2002/03. It made up only around 30%. Use synonyms
On the contrary
, the item with the highest Linking Words
percentage
of accessibility was Use synonyms
CD
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players
with approximately 50% of Use synonyms
users
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However
, in 2008, Linking Words
DVD
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players
became the most popular technological item, if we take into account that roughly 90% of the population of the UK had it. Use synonyms
Although
, approximately 70% of the English people had Linking Words
the
access to the Internet connection in 2008.
In 1994, Correct article usage
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CD
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players
were quite popular almost 50% of the population had Use synonyms
it
, and we can see Correct pronoun usage
one
gradual
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a gradual
increase
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their
percentage
until 2004/05Use synonyms
,
after we observe Remove the comma
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slight
decrease. The Correct article usage
a slight
CD
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players
reached a peak of almost 90% in 2004/05. The popularity of mobile phones fluctuated until 2002/03. After we can see Use synonyms
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increase
in its number of Add an article
an increase
users
until 2006/07, which is followed by a slight Use synonyms
increase
in 2008. Mobile phones reached a peak of almost 80% in 2008. We can observe a dramatic Use synonyms
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percentage
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users
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DVD
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players
from 2002/03 until 2004/05, followed by a gradual Use synonyms
increase
until 2008. The access to the Internet connection follows the same pattern and reaches the highest Use synonyms
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users
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2008
with more than 60% of the population of the UK.Change preposition
in 2008
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Vocabulary: Replace the words cd, dvd, percentage, players, users, increase with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradual" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
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