You have just spent a weekend at a friend's house. When you returned home, you discovered that you had left a coat there. There are some important belongings in the pockets. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter explain that you have left the coat there say what the coat looks like, where you think you left it and what was in the pockets make some suggestions about how to get all of your belongings back

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Dear Pat,

Last

weekend was wonderful. I had a blast staying at your place. When I returned home I realized that I had left my

coat

at your house. The

coat

is very important to me and it contains some very valuable belongings in it. My

coat

is brown with a high collar. I left it on your bed when I reached and

then

it was moved to the

coat

hangar. My

coat

had my wallet with all my

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in it. It

also

had my university card which I would need to enter my university. Most importantly, I left my phone charger inside my

coat

pocket. Would you please suggest to me a certain date and time when we can meet and get my

coat

back

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It is

also

possible for me to collect it on my way to university. Please let me know an option that suits you. Please let me know. Your friend Nilankar

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

157 words

6.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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