Some people are of the opinion that there should be a cae-free day once every month, on which no private vehicles are allowed on the road. Discuss the advantages and possible disadvantages.

Nowadays, many
people
are asking for a car-less
day
once in a
while
in which nobody is allowed to use their personal cars and everybody should just use clean transportation. I believe it is a nice reminder about our environment and could raise awareness in
people
but at the same time, I am not sure of it working out in a meaningful way. So, I believe it could create a false sense of effectiveness and
therefore
stop
people
from truly fighting for a cleaner environment.
Firstly
, to have a
day
once a month specified for the preservation of our habitat
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is generally a good thing. It automatically sends a few words to whoever pays attention to the calendar and raises awareness.
Also
, it conveys the message that the earth is in more danger now than it has ever been.
For instance
, it wasn't until they added a miners'
day
to the calendars that we found what a hard-working group of
people
they are.
Thus
, adding a carless
day
to our calendars will help
people
pay more attention to their surrounding
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.
On the other hand
, there is a threat hidden in
this
act and
that is
, we humans might feel so satisfied with ourselves that we begin to be destructive again. Certainly, one
day
of streets being free of private vehicles does not reduce the extent to which we have ruined our environment.
Moreover
,
people
get easily fooled by their own acts and eventually, might give up on every other environmental activity they do
as a result
of them not taking out their cars for one
day
.
For instance
, some
people
do a few push-ups every
day
and avoid going to the gym because they consider those push-ups as proper exercise. So, we tend to fool ourselves on a daily basis and we certainly don't want that to happen when we're talking about our nature.
To conclude
, the scheme of adding a carless
day
to our official calendars
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is in itself a good thing. But, we might want to look out for all the lies we are going to tell ourselves after we've done it and
furthermore
, avoid getting back to the previous phase of our history in which we destroyed nature.
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