The bar chart below shows the estimated sales of Jeans for two companies next year in Turkey.The pie chart shows the projected market share of the two companies in Jeans at the end of next year.
The display bar chart
as well as
pie
chart describes the estimated sales of Correct article usage
the pie
Jeans
for two companies next year in Turkey and the project market share of the two companies in Jeans
at the end
of next year.
Estimated sales of jeans
next year in Turkey, the data is in thousands of pairs. The mango company
and jack & jones comapany
in Correct your spelling
company
januray
it is more than 100 and 450, in Correct your spelling
january
februy
it is around 100 and 250, in Correct your spelling
february
march
it is 120 and 250, in Capitalize word
March
april
it is more than 110 and 300, in Change the capitalization
April
may
it is 200 and 350, in Capitalize the word
May
june
it is 250 and 400, in Change the capitalization
June
july
it is more than 250 and 400, in Change the capitalization
July
augest
it is 400 and 350, in Correct your spelling
august
september
it is around 400 and 600, in Change the capitalization
September
october
it is 500 and 600, in Change the capitalization
October
november
it is around 500 and 700 and in Change the capitalization
November
december
it is 600 and 900. The project market share by mango Change the capitalization
December
company
is 20%, by jack and jones comapny
is 30% and by others is 50%.
Correct your spelling
company
To conclude
, the above describe about
the sales of Remove the preposition
apply
jeans
by mango company
, jack and jones company
and by other company
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