Crime rates in most countries is often higher in urban areas than in rural areas. What do you think? What can be done to reduce crime rate?

There is no doubt that these days, violation become more popular in urban parts . Some people argue that the incidence of crime is more common and higher in urban areas than in rural areas. I totally agree with

this

statement , in the following paragraph, I will discuss the potential reason behind

this

issue and provide a number of suggestions to solve

this

matter. First of all , I strongly believe that violence percentage increased nowadays, most

criminals

who commit

crimes

have their

reasons

and

that is

the main cause.

Additionally

, the solution to solve these

cases

is that law enforcement officers should investigate these issues by asking the

reasons

and becoming good listeners . Most minor

cases

such

as stealing valuable things or fighting , most of these incidence happen in the countryside rather than in urbanized cities.

On the contrary

, some

criminals

commit

crimes

without

reasons

or forgivable

reasons

such

as racist

cases

or mass shootings,these

crimes

incidents usually happen in major cities.

Additionally

,the best

ways

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to fix these offences

are

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for the country should have new laws and seriously vanish these issues by gaining the penalty guilt.

Moreover

, because people fear penalty death that can deter them from illegal activities.

To sum up

, some

criminals

commit

crimes

because they have their own

reasons

, most of these a small

cases

like stealing valuable items, and the way to shrink these

cases

is the law enforcement officers should investigate the

cases

by asking

the

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reasons

and

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good listeners.

while

some

criminals

are commit crime without

reasons

or forgivable

reasons

such

as mass shooting and the way to reduce crime rate is the country should have new laws

such

as applying the capital punishment.