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The graph below shows the percentage changes in the number of international students graduating from universities in different Canadian provinces between 2001 and 2006.

The graph below shows the percentage changes in the number of international students graduating from universities in different Canadian provinces between 2001 and 2006.
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The graph presents information about how many numbers of
students
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 in percentages, international
students
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 graduated, from universities around Canadian
provinces
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, between 2001 and 2006. All in all. It is obvious that in all
provinces
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, many
students
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 finished their studies in 2016, except
Alberta
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.
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, in 2002 all eight
provinces
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 had lower than
2006
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in 2006
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graduated
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students
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. excluding
Alberta
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. In 2006, there
was
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 three top highest positions, where the number of
students
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 in these areas was over 10 per
cent
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. They are British Columbia, Nova Scotia, and New Brunswick; meanwhile, Ontario
Alberta
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 released just under 6 per
cent
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 of
students
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 who graduated from their universities, these areas had the least graduated
students
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 in 2006. If we compare to 2002, there were three areas that had the highest number of graduations from universities above 6 per
cent
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, they are New Brunswick, Nova Scotia, and Quebec; meanwhile, the rest had just under 6 per
cent
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 and above 4 per
cent
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, the
provinces
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 were
Alberta
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, British Columbia, Monita, Newfoundland and Labrador and Ontario.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words students, provinces, alberta, cent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "numbers of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "just under" was used 2 times.
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