The graph below shows the percentage changes in the number of international students graduating from universities in different Canadian provinces between 2001 and 2006.
The graph presents information about how many numbers of
students
in percentages, international students
graduated, from universities around Canadian provinces
, between 2001 and 2006.
All in all. It is obvious that in all provinces
, many students
finished their studies in 2016, except Alberta
. However
, in 2002 all eight provinces
had lower than 2006
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in 2006
graduated
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graduates
students
. excluding Alberta
.
In 2006, there was
three top highest positions, where the number of Change the verb form
were
students
in these areas was over 10 per cent
. They are British Columbia, Nova Scotia, and New Brunswick; meanwhile, Ontario Alberta
released just under 6 per cent
of students
who graduated from their universities, these areas had the least graduated students
in 2006.
If we compare to 2002, there were three areas that had the highest number of graduations from universities above 6 per cent
, they are New Brunswick, Nova Scotia, and Quebec; meanwhile, the rest had just under 6 per cent
and above 4 per cent
, the provinces
were Alberta
, British Columbia, Monita, Newfoundland and Labrador and Ontario.Submitted by misstiasclassroom on
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