The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided graph illustrates the
number
of shops that closed and the Use synonyms
number
of new Use synonyms
stores
that opened in one nation from 2011 to 2018. The essay describes the main features and compares the features.
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Overall
, it is certain that both the amount of lock and open outlets were decreased during the period. Linking Words
In contrast
, the Linking Words
number
of closed Use synonyms
stores
fluctuated rather than unlock shops.
With regards to, closures Use synonyms
stores
fluctuated so gradually from above 6000 in 2011 to 6500 in 2014. Use synonyms
Then
, the trajectory decreased dramatically to less than 1000 in 2015. After that, they again increased to above 5000 in 2016. Meanwhile, Linking Words
this
curve remained stable till 2018.
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On the other hand
, the Linking Words
number
of opening Use synonyms
stores
at above 8000 in 2011 Use synonyms
then
Linking Words
this
Linking Words
number
dropped rapidly to 4500 in 2012. Use synonyms
In addition
, the trajectory of the unlock outlet again rose above 6000 in 2014. Linking Words
Furthermore
, the Linking Words
number
of opening shops decreased to 2000 in 2015. Use synonyms
Finally
, Linking Words
this
rate levelled off from 4000 in 2015 to 2017 Linking Words
then
slightly declined to 3000 in 2018.Linking Words
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 69%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, stores with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
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