There have been several complaints about the reception area where visitors to your company arrive. Your manager has asked you to suggest how the reception area could be improved Write a letter to your manager. In your letter •describe the complaints that have been made •say why the reception area is important •suggest how the reception area could be improved
Dear Jason,
I’m writing in order to give you feedback about the reception area after I have got several complaints.
To begin
with, as for the complaints that have been made, it is about the lack of professionals on our staff. In addition
, people from the encounter were absent when clients arrived. And it was not the first time!
Well, let me remind you, why the reception is so important! This
is the first impression our clients have of our company, and it is crucial for us to make a good impression!
Anyway, I’d like to suggest how the welcome area could be improved! First,
all the staff must come back in formation, secondly
, it will be not permitted to let the reception without employees –let me know if you need more staff members! And then
, after these complaints, I suggest that it will be time to change all the decorations to create a new atmosphere!
Please, let me know if you require any further
information, and don’t hesitate to contact me. Take care!
Cheers
TonySubmitted by tony.vantroo on
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