The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007
The given line chart represents the
number
of overseas tourists
to three various places in a European country between the period of 1987 to 2007.
Overall
, the ratio of overseas visitors
increased from 1987 to 2007. Moreover
, number
of Change the article
a number
the number
tourists
visited
the coast was the dominant.
The Wrong verb form
visiting
number
of visitors
went
to the coast area in Europe was 40 Correct pronoun usage
who went
thousand
in 1987. The visitors
declined and reached Correct quantifier usage
number of visitors
at
approximately 37 Change preposition
apply
thousand
in 1992. In 2007, the number
of tourists
rose rapidly at
just over 80 Change preposition
to
thousand
. In 1987, people from other countries visited
the mountains in a European country Correct pronoun usage
who visited
was
at 20 Correct subject-verb agreement
were
thousand
and this
number
went upto
just below 40 Correct your spelling
up to
thousand
in 2007.
The overseas
Correct quantifier usage
number of overseas
visited
Replace the word
visits
the
lakes was Change preposition
to the
at
10 Change preposition
apply
thousand
in 1987. These tourists
increased gradually and reached at
40 Change preposition
apply
thousand
in 1997. In 2002, overseas visitors
visited the lates reached at
Change preposition
apply
the
peak Correct article usage
a
at
just over 70 Change preposition
of
thousand
and then
this
number
dropped at
50 Change preposition
to
thousand
in 2007.Submitted by saadahmad33102 on
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Vocabulary: The word "just over" was used 2 times.
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